Ok, I gave it a go, I really did. After 3 days, I was only on page 50 or so because I just couldn’t get into it…and I came across this sentence:
“She swam like a mermaid in the swamp-tank of my dreams.”
and only a few pages later:
“I have made my heart into a camellia floating in a bowl of clear, pure water when in fact it was a dark and bloated thing.”
Huh?
Moving on…
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I love your posts, I totally feel like I know you, I can hear you saying this, lol.
Moving on…….
lol. I wasn’t especially impressed with Max Tivolli either, although I did manage to finish. My main problem was that I thought it was stealing ideas from Benjamin Button
Are you trying to tell me that you’ve never once felt like a camellia floating in a bowl of clear, pure water? I’m so sad for you.